rough cut edit and feed back

Our teacher looked over our rough cut of our film and gave us feed back on how to improve. One thing was our titles, to make them more bold and stand out and secondly was to keep our cuts sharp to make it more effective. Our sound we was told to improve because we added too much of one sound and not so much on another.

we have applied all of this to our film and made changes, and it has worked out very nicely and suits our thriller well.